first of all i'd like to say that that story was a huge facepalm and i apologize to anyone who's ever read it. i'm so sorry. like heck, WHO would go out of their way to just try kidnapping a girl? maannnn that sucked. I read it some time ago and I just felt so bad about myself. i hate my 12 year old self.
anyway this is just to mock crimson seas.
so you have a bunch of "main" characters. the main female lead (cringes) is sought after by three stupid men, two pirates and one son of a noble person. snob. i think. xD annd the pirates E and A are enemies and hate each other's guts and so things get complicated when they steal each other's girlfriend. i don't know why I'm laughing right now. and the poor guy, R, who found her to being with and wants to marry her (kinda like a childhood enemy, haha) he spends millions to impress her but she's so stuck up and doesn't even say thank you (but she does tell him she doesn't like him and to get lost but he still persists on marrying her. how dumb) she actually escapes to join E because she hates/likes him. and he tries to steal her expensive jewelry and gets kicked by his pirate superiors, C and W. whatever. so cliche. oh and A is kinda like the drunkard and he's a really creepy stalker. and the MC is really really weak and she can't even walk by herself. what a story. *claps*
right.
and the entire point of the story to me now is to say that men are amazing and girls are weak.
what? really?
if i'd rewrite it, i'd move things around a bit.
men should have to learn how to cook and clean and sew
and girls should be pirates.
okay that would be good i'm so done. 8)
from first chapter modified:
stupid kids.
and in the end they all sank and died.
thank you,,,, wonderful story.
and finally, everyone's favorite dream scene.
the end.
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